Hello, Poetry Friend
I love mornings — the darker the better. So “The Morning” by W.S. Merwin is a natural poem pairing for me. The Daily Poem covered it in 2019, but I only found it in 2022. I’d been looking for a Merwin to learn, and this one surprised me and called my name.
It begins, “Would I love it this way if it could last”
The poem has no punctuation; it’s just one long, loving meditation, from a poet who created a palm tree sanctuary in Hawaii and who adored my beautiful, flawed state of Texas. Whose poems always take me somewhere I didn’t know I needed to go.
The speaker in the poem loves The Morning but wonders whether he would love it this way if, if, if, if, if, if, if, if, if. (Nine times, if.) My favorite if’s come all in a clump:
would I love it this way if I were somewhere else or if I were younger for the first time or if these very birds were not singing or I could not hear them or see their trees
Before it was ordinary to be consumed by fear, I was consumed by fear. Before it was common to be consumed by anger, I was consumed by anger. Like all feelings, those are valid and potentially life-saving, but in my case, they were also a little soul-killing.
Enter Merwin and “The Morning.” Like him, I remember everything everything.
Poetry Journal
Read W.S. Merwin’s poem. Think about what is your morning.
Jot down what you notice, what you like, what you don’t, what questions you have, and at least one way in which the poem speaks to you.
Read the poem aloud every day for a week. (Until I share the next poem, on Wednesday.) Is a pairing arising?
Write your own poem about “The Morning” and the new association is has for you. (Mine is at meganwillome.com.) If you like, email me what you write.
Happy poeming!
Megan
Always love hearing you recite, Megan :)
This line, one of my faves:
"would I love it this way if I were somewhere else"