I like, "Whoever you are." Approachable. I think that second one, a few lines down, is a nice refresher that all this cosmic wonder, "infinity," and potential is available to each of us regular folks.
(I also like that he chose not to repeat it a third time? It would have felt too forced for my liking.)
I think I would've been tempted to use it a third time (I like 3s). But you're right--holding it to two and the spacing of those two sets it apart while also making it approachable.
Congrats on your projects, Megan!
I like, "Whoever you are." Approachable. I think that second one, a few lines down, is a nice refresher that all this cosmic wonder, "infinity," and potential is available to each of us regular folks.
(I also like that he chose not to repeat it a third time? It would have felt too forced for my liking.)
Thanks, Bethany!
I think I would've been tempted to use it a third time (I like 3s). But you're right--holding it to two and the spacing of those two sets it apart while also making it approachable.
Tearing up…looking forward to our conversations, as I suspect that blessings will follow for both of us. 💕
Amen.
Entrance into things to come,
wanting more than the undone of yesterday bawling
under the Sun heavy dishes done for naught but crawling hoping
for more to come, more moments in the Sun with plenty awareness,
more mornings of coffee and music and eagerness to enter anew
that which brews beneath the surface, in the immaculate everlasting fun :D
"immaculate everlasting fun"
Amen, sir!
The me I often wish I wasn't....that was a striking line.
I think one of the gifts of getting older is wanting to share those parts of ourselves.
"I need to honor the me that often I wish I wasn't."
"I need to honor my own eyes that "have forgotten how to see."
LOVE me some Rilke, Gioia, Willome:)
Aww, Katie, you're the best!