Megan, there is so much to ponder in this poem....I have Carroll's book as well but this poem didn't really make sense to me until now (I guess I didn't realize she was making poem out of the lines in other poems). And it rhymes! You have given me something to ponder; if I write my own I'll let you know.
Also, I smiled so much at your application of "rainbow, rainbow, rainbow" over the word 'forever' in the piece of music you were learning (And I need to go find the Malotte Lord's Prayer arrangement. I learn something from you all the time...)
Megan, there is so much to ponder in this poem....I have Carroll's book as well but this poem didn't really make sense to me until now (I guess I didn't realize she was making poem out of the lines in other poems). And it rhymes! You have given me something to ponder; if I write my own I'll let you know.
Also, I smiled so much at your application of "rainbow, rainbow, rainbow" over the word 'forever' in the piece of music you were learning (And I need to go find the Malotte Lord's Prayer arrangement. I learn something from you all the time...)
Yes, Jody, please let me know if you write along these lines.
The fact that she rhymed with these lines from other poems astounds me. That is elevated!
You've probably heard the Malotte Lord's Prayer. It's the one I refer to as the Sandi Patti version.
Hey Megan I will definitely let you know if I come up with a coherent poem. It's a challenging task!
And yes of course, as soon as I googled it there were a score of recordings of the Lord's Prayer on YouTube, although Sandy Patti's didn't show up :-)
I am definitely showing my age. Not sure there ever was a video.